What do you thing of my singing and voice? :) (need a lot of critique!!)?

You are very young and you need to have voice lessons. You sound like you have potential and you have the look if that's you on the pic. You sound a little weak which would be improved once you learn proper breathing techniques. You can find tons of info on-line and probably a bunch of advise on how to improve your voice. You need to take the time to do the research on this. If it's something you really want to do you'll find a way to earn the money for a vocal coach. Good luck!